Poem: For The Forgotten One


This poem is dedicated for those who feels forgotten, who feels left alone, and who feels like no body care. Many people looks like they concern about the others while there is no actual evidence which able to support the nice words from their mouth. This is about the forgotten one, and still, no body remember. ~cassle.wordpress.com~

As the time passed by,
The clock let you die,
Time never ask why,
Left alone in the dark, oh my!

Files never record you on the list,
No one saw you through the mist,
So you are walking for a please,
While no body care and leave.

A sparkle in the light say,
For a glance of hope, may,
You look up to the morning sky,
Found nothing, just a smile.

Still forgotten, you are.

6 May 2010, 19:49 WIB.
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32 responses to this post.

  1. Hmmm. Kasihannya.

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  2. Posted by arendrafa on May 22, 2010 at 1:28 pm

    About whom? Of what?

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  3. WOW.. impressive. I knew you were a poet :))

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  4. Posted by Sunil Kumar on May 23, 2010 at 2:40 am

    Great poem!! Actually this is a fact that people do feel lonely and forgotten

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  5. nice poem i love it
    i also write poem because its great communication way to share our personal
    feelings 🙂 🙂

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  6. Posted by tim on May 23, 2010 at 2:45 am

    What a beautiful poem. I really like it

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  7. Posted by tim on May 23, 2010 at 2:48 am

    What a beautiful post. Good job

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  8. Why are we forgotten. Is it because we don’t really show that we are alive, we don’t tell about our presence, or what is is. I don’t really understood poems, I still can’t. But the question remains. Why are we forgotten?

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    • Umm, I think you are partially correct. Some people feel forgotten because they don’t really attract much attention, but on the other hand, some feel forgotten because they think they have attracted the attention even though it’s not for them. I don’t really know for sure, but… that’s what I’m thinking of right now. 😀

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  9. Posted by Yuri on May 23, 2010 at 3:19 am

    Good one, it’s really giving me a feeling that i am not alone to feel that
    thanks for posting !!

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  10. Posted by citrajitsaha03 on May 23, 2010 at 3:39 am

    Such a nice poem. Really time waits for none and life in the earth is nothing but the flow of time

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  11. Posted by miromior on May 23, 2010 at 4:01 am

    by, die, my, why, list, mist, say, may, very good rhyming word that ends a line of verse
    rhyme

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  12. Very Nice poem. I think everybody should read the greatest Bengali Poet Rabindra Nath Tagore’s poem for depth knowledge.

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  13. Posted by shahadat2010 on May 23, 2010 at 4:53 am

    WaW! hats the poem about the life

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  14. I can not say that I am single, but I think that behind these words was a deep melancholy

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  15. Posted by omar on May 23, 2010 at 7:15 am

    it is the reality of life.

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  16. heart touching poem.. if you wrote it by yourself then great talent… and very true

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  17. Posted by Promy on May 23, 2010 at 8:44 am

    I feels forgotten.

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  18. Sigh..a sad poem, but then it depicts reality. But then again, people who are left alone should turn to God and they will find true friend.

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  19. A very touching. Poetry is good enough

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  20. Posted by sarosh on May 23, 2010 at 9:34 am

    Very nice poem and really feel very sad reading out about this forgotten ones and being let alone is really painful

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  21. Posted by kamranggt on May 23, 2010 at 9:38 am

    Very nice poem. I appreciate the work. This poem cheer up such people who feels left alone.

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  22. Thanks for this poem. Very inspiring and give courage

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  23. Great expression that reminds the sweet memories with our beloved ones!

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  24. Nice poem, do you have more? I like pieces one can relate to. Thank you, great job.

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  25. Posted by milrey on May 23, 2010 at 12:23 pm

    i have also experienced this kind of feeling..
    sometimes it hurts but we must admit that sometimes we were forgotten.

    anyways, thanks for sharing this.
    such a beautiful poem

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  26. Posted by lia on May 26, 2010 at 1:14 am

    nah ni bahasa Inggris puisimu cassle….aku harus translate dulu…..

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    • I’m studying English.. 🙂 Well I’ll send you some of my Indonesian poem later. I’m building another blog which will consist my stories and (might be poems) in Indonesian language. Thanks for your comment!

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